Title: Random
JQ37 - October 18, 2007 09:36 PM (GMT)
http://ddwp.blogspot.comOk. I am writing this story and I need some opinions. :stitch:
SKKaty - October 18, 2007 10:02 PM (GMT)
I am not sure how old you are, but if you are around the ages of the kids in your story, that is very impressive writing.
I loved the line "Nate took that as a license to be bad of course."
And your poems that show how she travels:
"“With this unicorn hair, Pure and White, I will take a trip, into the land of light.”"
Very clever.
I like the other story about Joshua and Felicity as well. Will be interested to see how it turns out. :thumbsup:
JQ37 - October 18, 2007 10:14 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (SKKaty @ Oct 18 2007, 05:02 PM) |
I am not sure how old you are, but if you are around the ages of the kids in your story, that is very impressive writing.
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yeah i am middle school age :coolbubble:
SKKaty - October 18, 2007 10:15 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (JQ37 @ Oct 18 2007, 10:14 PM) |
yeah i am middle school age :coolbubble: |
Are you writing these stories for an assignment in class, or do you just enjoy writing and coming up with stories?
It's a great start and I hope you keep up with it.
JQ37 - October 18, 2007 10:22 PM (GMT)
Well the short story was an assignment but I decided it was too good for school so I kept it and turned in something else.
The other one was done because I luv to write! :D
SKKaty - October 18, 2007 10:49 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (JQ37 @ Oct 18 2007, 10:22 PM) |
Well the short story was an assignment but I decided it was too good for school so I kept it and turned in something else.
The other one was done because I luv to write! :D |
That is really great that you love it. It is refreshing to know there are still some kids out there who love to read and write.
I have always dreamed of being a writer, maybe some day!
JQ37 - October 19, 2007 01:23 AM (GMT)
chapter three posted
woot!
nicks_ahoy - October 19, 2007 02:46 AM (GMT)
dude you've got serious talent. there are people in my 9th grade honors english class that arent even close to writing that well.
JQ37 - October 19, 2007 10:19 AM (GMT)
SKKaty - October 19, 2007 03:41 PM (GMT)
I hope Felicity learns a valuable lesson.
JQ37 - October 19, 2007 09:47 PM (GMT)
JQ37 - October 23, 2007 10:39 PM (GMT)
O.K., I finally gat chapter 4 posted. :)
Jessiestudio - November 10, 2007 03:24 AM (GMT)
omg you are an amzing writer i wish i could do that and i am older then you lol keep writting i look forward to seeing the story get published
JQ37 - November 15, 2007 10:39 PM (GMT)
Chapter Five Fiiianallllly Posted.
I have had so much homework. I have about half of chapter six written. I should hav eit posted some time next week! :)
JQ37 - November 27, 2007 02:23 AM (GMT)
Chapter Six Posted. Working on chapter Seven.
P.S.: My blog has passed the 100 view mark. WOOT! :)
JQ37 - January 3, 2008 02:07 PM (GMT)
Chapter 7 is up. I would've posted it WWWWWWWWAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY sooner but I am working on a Science Project, Math Project, and a 30 page packet and I only have a little free time.
I have a new site. dwpp.wordpress.com.
I is an ADDITION not a replacement. The other site is still up and running. The new one is just proofred better and has no extras.
SKKaty - January 3, 2008 02:53 PM (GMT)
I need to catch up on those chapters. Hopefully after work I can get to reading them. I bet they are great!
JQ37 - February 25, 2008 12:48 AM (GMT)
After a lot of procastrinating, Chapter 8 is up!!!!